The monotonic riff in it I like a lot, the softer 'commercial' string riff-cut, is nice, but maybe a little too 'clear' .. vague the string up maybe a bit..
The break is weird, but lovely. Soft notes which combine the monotonic riff, whereas now the strings in the background seem to be 'fading' slowly, makin them 'softer' .. in short, a good WiP (Work-In-Progress).
I miss 'the peak' tho' .. but that's maybe because it's a preview :coffee:
Nice track, keep wprking on it.